There are so many beautiful places in the world and I can't wait to visit them all. Today, I list my top three places that I want to visit, and if you guys had been there you can give me some comments.
My first place is Bahamas. I want to visit there because some of my friends that had been there said Bahamas is a great place to go to have a vocation. They have great foods, great people, and most importantly, great views.
My second place is Spain. The reason is I am taking Spanish now and I would like to go there and learn more about their language and their culture. I'm pretty sure I won't be able to understand them because of what I heard, they talk quite fast. I want to try the traditional Spanish food there and visit Barcelona, hopefully I can go watch a soccer game and meet some former soccer stars.
My last place is Bali. Some of you might not know where Bali is, it is an island near Indonesia. I've watch some TV shows that shows attractions in Bali. I believe Bali is one of the top places for vocation.
Hi Brian,
I enjoyed reading your well-formatted post. While you have some grammar errors, your writing is improving! You'll want to make sure to provide an attribution for the image. Also, you probably want to delete the two pages you are not using as well at the Author info text box. Regarding your comments, they are solid, except one of them needed to be on a non-OHS blog.